Writing Party-By Caleb

We have finished our personal narratives so we had a writing party. We ate a chocolate cupcake and goldfish during the party. We went around reading people's personal narratives. Then we wrote comments on a piece of paper. You were not able to suggest ideas or point out mistakes. You weren't allowed to draw pictures. You could say sentences like "You had a good beginning." 

I had a lot of fun! I hope we get more writing parties.